借詩還魂

忽然懷念有一段日子，在別人的留言版顛顛dud地嬉戲，言不及義、語無倫次，三更半夜對住電腦篤篤篤，其情其狀其實有d似唔知幾多失之少年，硬要留連街頭，視歸如死。
適逢該名版主亦唔知為乜，日理萬機仲晚晚送往迎來，兵來將擋、水來口水花倒淹，大家都幾快樂，或者應該話，各顧各、自得其樂。
冇乜好講又或乜都唔想講就整首詩貼下。古往今來好詩唔少，自己都見過一d，copy and paste，容乜易。詩好，言有盡，意無窮。
若換作貼連載小說，傻咩。
有d貼完就算，有d順手copy一份。當中Amichai的[A Dog After Love]得版主歡心，話要過把癮，譯之。佢o既係文雅版。有句話十年唔逢一閏？(今年就閏七月啦。) 本人一時手癢，打破唔譯詩o既慣例，插一把手加個嬉戲版，今日魂魄唔齊失手摷出來，一不做二不休，借詩還魂。

After you left me
自你撇我
I let a dog smell at
搵隻狗黎聞
My chest and my belly.
我心口肚腩
It will fill its nose
佢聞夠聞飽
And set out to find you.
就出發去摷你

I hope it will tear the
我想佢撕開
Testicles of your lover and bite off his penis
你新歡o既蛋蛋兼咬甩佢何B仔
Or at least
至少至少
Will bring me your stockings between his teeth.
用佢棚牙擔你o既絲襪返黎

(04/2004)